working on a pitch/log line

my friend camille who has tons of experience pitching stuff to networks etc…suggested i rewrite logline so it doesn’t give away film. people tend to build their own expectations of what a film will be like when the logline is too literal. so that’s my homework for tomorrow! brainstorming and coming up with one liners

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A log line is a brief summary of a television program or movie, often providing both a synopsis of the program’s plot, and an emotionalhook” to stimulate interest.